DrSevenSeizeMD's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Unforgotten Realms: Epi3]

okay

Alright. First of all, I liked the story line, and I like your sense of humor. The characters were funny and the concept was great in my opinion. My suggestions: the graphics were a bit sloppy. Now, I don't feel a great flash neccessarily needs Van Gogh graphics and I thought they were fine. That may also be your style, and I totally support artistic freedom. None the less, others may take off for that. Also, there were a few instances where the voices cracked. However, who ever did the voices spoke loud and clear. So I give you kudos for sound because I could definitely understand you, just a little scratchy at times. All in all, I think it's a good flash and I protected it. Good luck!

Sirschmoopy responds:

The scatch comes from when flash converts it and I havn't had a way to fix it without lowering quality. I do all the voices, script, and animation. I like the graphics as they are simple, funny/cartoony and don't take me 3 weeks to make.

I could spend a month and make the graphics look super clean but I think that the animation would be infact LESS funny and I wouldn't be able to do an episode a week.

When it takes me 30 minutes to write the script, hour to do all the audio and then 10 hours to do this quality of animating, I would rather do everything in sticks.

It doesn't bother me if people want to vote less because of graphics because I'm not trying to make a disney film in the first place.

[TooF Fassabowl!]

Lol

I absolutely love this series, and this movie in particular. First of all, it's very creative, and original. But what I like the most is how well you develop your characters. They have their own personalities and that really gives kudos to your flash. Great job, and I can't wait to see more from you.

[Illusions Episode 7]

wow

Very excellent graphics. If I could give you more than 10 for graphics, I would. Wonderful!!! I can tell you put much work into this flash, and we need more flashes like this. My only complaint is what another user mentioned, the voices were a bit hard to hear at certain points. But nothing major. I liked it! Good job and good luck with your future projects!

PaulF responds:

Thanks for the comment Seven. I did put very much work into this. I am glad you liked it.

=D

[LL-Stranded]

great!

Your graphics were great and the movie was fine but I really wanted to write you a review to tell you how happy I was to see the opening menu. I gave you a 10 in interactivity because my only option upon loading the flash wasn't just play. You had buttons for scene select and extras. So many people just slap a preloader on their flash and that's it. This showed you put thought and work into your flash. Good job!

CourgetteClock responds:

hah thanks, nice to know all the work I put in the menu paid of =D

[IMP, Sassi 1]

I hate Bob Saget...

But I love your flash. First off, I love your animation style. I'm going to go watch your other films now. The graphics were great. Everything flowed nicely, and just looked downright professional. It was very funny and had a great message. My only complaint was that the voices of the two characters watching the show were a little hard to hear at some points. Other than that, sound was excellent. Excellent sound effects, excellent music. Great work, good luck on future projects!

RogerregoRRoger responds:

Well my older movies look horrific, so not all's well O_o;
at least I improved I guess. still have a lot of improvement left. Up and awaay.

[Sonic Glitched 2]

Great!

Wonderful! First off, I believe your profile said female, and I'm always happy to see another female NG member. Second, I normally don't like the sonic movies, but this one was great. Your graphics were wonderful. They weren't too small or choppy like so many other sonic movies. They were just perfect. Your sound effects were great too and added character to the movie. Most importantly was your sense of humor. It was a funny flash that flowed nicely. Overall, great work!!

[The Blue Ringed Octopus]

I love it

I think it's great! My favorite part was the octopus attack. It was well drawn, some may say it could have been better, but we know it is a child presenting it, so it works out nicely. It was "cute". The sound was great because she spoke clearly with an appropriate volume. I like educational flashes, and this past year I taught 5th grade science. So tell your daughter I give her an A+. If she makes more, send them this way.

ThatChadGuy responds:

The more A+ she gets, the more likely she is to do more. Thanks for the review!

[Fun in the Woods]

Good

You did a good job at creating a short flash. You had a joke, you told it, and you did it well. Your graphics were great, your sound was great, very clear, and it was humorous. It's hard to create an effective short movie, but you did. Good job!

[Hello (remake)]

Very well done

Excellent job. It gave me chills. You succeeded in making an emotional flash. You captured her feelings and released them through a very effective animation. Your graphics were perfect for the song. I really liked how you used black and white but emphasized things with red. Very creative. I couldn't think of a better to way to represent the lyrics. Good work!

Madelief responds:

Thank you so much!
I really appreciate your review!

[The Toilet]

Funny

Good job. This was an excellent example of how to do a proper short cartoon. Perfect. It may have just been my computer, so don't worry too much, but the sound was a little quiet. I had to turn it up alot. Your graphics were great, and the joke was good. The transition into the one character's mind and back to the flash was perfect as well. I suggest you make a full legnth cartoon about this. Same characters and everything. In any event, this was a great short. Good job, and good luck!